Opinions please?

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Opinions please?

I think of you every day, but you still seem so far away. With each and every breath I take, every moment I am awake, you're on my mind both night and day. I keep hoping things will come out right. The depth of my love you'll never know, for my true feelings I can no longer show. You loved me once, but I pushed you away. I treated you bad, I forced you to stray. I want you back, my heart aches deep, for many hours I sit and weep. The pain I caused you, you'll never forget, but I am trying hard to pay my debt. How can I ever make it up to you? My apologies are way past due. There's a look of sadness in your eyes. I caused a lot, but I told you no lies. Just remember the good times, forgive the bad. Please don't forget the happiness we've had.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Love your letter in rhyme. You have a real knack for rhythm, too, faltering only a few times. Keep on writing!