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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Do you like my new poem?Question: Do you like my new poem?I pray Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: nice, bro. I LIKE the use of "wealthing" as a verb, it was one of two things that caught my eye on first read. second was "green tapestry/woven mint for me" which gave me visions of expansive carpets laid throughout the mansion made of hundred and thousand dollar bills. I take "bottom most line/untouchability" to mean that at the very least the monetary answer to your prayer should make you comfortable enough that you never have to worry about money... "Capital City trickle up" throws me, and though I guess I understand the line on its own, I don't get its meaning as the last line of the whole piece.... I don't mind that, I just wonder if I'm missing something. |