Is it good?

Question:

Is it good?

I'm writing a book and I want to know f its a good one. Here's the URL:

http://walkingonbothsides.bebo.com...

I didn't finish it. But please tell me what you think abut it so far. Who's your fave character in the book and why (just to make sure you read at least some of it)?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: good (fav character was Alisha just so you know, she reminds me of my fiance lol)
umm...it's a great story but you need to work on the structure and grammatical errors, that's the only thing that made it kind of confusing. You'll get it with practice :). Writing a book takes time, so don't stress..eventually you'll get it!