Question:
Is my poem sorta good?
Has anyone ever told you how beautiful you are,
so beautiful and here you are with me?
From the very first I noticed, you are God's gift to all of us,
and the holder of a very special key.
Do people try to stop you, so they can say, "I love you"?
You spread love in everything you do.
Someone must've mentioned you're a beautiful work of art,
you filled the hollow chambers in my heart.
You mean no one's ever whispered, "You're nothing less than a miracle".
Well "You're nothing less than a miracle", to me.
Is it OK to tell you, that just your elegant presence,
makes me want to wrap myself in thee.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
give it to the girl,
i would faint if i recived something like that
i love it,
makes me cry