My song lyrics, please comment....?

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My song lyrics, please comment....?

HONESTY IS TRAGEDY
by Saint John
From the forthcoming effort "All That I Bleed"

Sitting here in this dead end town
Picturesque hearts beat upside down...
Carousels spin me alive
Oh, and only if I tried...

Foosteps where you stepped on me
Hidden with the earth beneath.
Moments stored, lest we forget
Pendants torn of sweet regret...

Never I always true to you;
To thyself I bled for two.

Painted veils upon our brows
Signed upon two crimson vows.
Tw'light's a maddening serenade,
As shone, you'd shine "our" promenade...

Hands forged into an entity,
Revered by saints, jealousy.
A dare, a glance stolen in frame
Seized by a wind untamed...

Never you always true to me
For honesty is tragedy.

Lies beneath reason,
A season for seasons
Beguiled for a "bye"
Accost, for what is the why?

My jewel, I now suffer-free
Honestly, honesty is tragedy...

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3 days ago
Arrghh..."Footsteps"

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 3 days ago
Arrghh..."Footsteps"