Tell me what u think of this poem?

Question:

Tell me what u think of this poem?

Love Life

Happy heart
Nothing goes wrong.
Got the one,
The perfect one made just for me.

Destined it had seemed,
Seeing her from day to day.
Dashed were my dreams,
When I had heard she had said, ??He isn??t made for me.??

Furious am I
Heart ripped fiercely in two.
Hit the wall with all my anger,
Fell and wept and wished, ??Why tell me now but later.??

Found out it was a lie,
Stumped, yes, am I.
Should I go for her or not,
Heart still unprepared upon this questioning thought.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Wonderful! You should submit it! But yet, there's just something missing.. something not there....