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Just a little something I worked hard on. What do you think?

Hoping to meet theone that I love,
I closed my eyes and made a wish.
Groping for him in the dark,
Groaning when he's not there.
Listen to my words.
You must know this:
Parts of me,
Inside,
Groan.
Touching,
Loving him,
Enjoying us.
Loyal is my heart,
Not black like some hearts are.
Every night I wait for him,
Singing in the light of our love.
Something this perfect can never end.

10 points will go to the person who can telll me what I did with this poem that caused me so much effort.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The lines reflect the syllable count. You went from 9-1 and then back up again.