Please rate my poem?

Question:

Please rate my poem?

Squirrel bounding across the lawn,
scampering merrily up the tree.
Joyfully, nibbling at the seed bell I left for the birds,
It was a pleasure to shoot him dead!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You know after I saw a documentary on the BBC about squirrels stealing bird seed like tiny furry commandos...I can appreciate the gist of this poem--kill em all.

Good ending surprising.

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