What do you tink of my poem?

Question:

What do you tink of my poem?

Got a hood on your eyes so I can’t see ya
Invisible I cant feel ya
Imaginary friend
In the back of my mind
A clock in time

You’re the mister
On to miss
The kiss inside copulates
is the one I reminisce

The one melted
The one under your fist
The one in side warming the persist
You think that this is
What
No baby no crush
This I s a vase encased with no dust
The allusion
Of you I cant’
It is a must
I love you and in you I trust

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6 days ago
SORRY THINK!!!!

6 days ago
If you are gonna write negative things don't comment at all!!!!!!!!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 days ago
SORRY THINK!!!!6 days ago
If you are gonna write negative things don't comment at all!!!!!!!! fix the few spelling errors and it's pretty good If it is supposed to be a love poem, I must say, it is one of the most stale, most plastic and most loveless love poems I've come across in these links.
But with more effort, more feeling and a bit of rhyme and rhythm, you could certainly better express your love and trust for "you".

good luck