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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Do you like my poem please help me fix the last part?Question: Do you like my poem please help me fix the last part?Fear is grey Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
parts are good however shorten it. i mean take a lot of the its out first off. try smells of an eerie scent,sounds of screeching,kissing the cheeck,end with watching a helpless child endure selfless pain |