What do you think?

Question:

What do you think?

To those back home
I am gone
yet my memory will go on
kiss the kids I love them so
let them know I had to go
Tell my parents there are no regrets
to those who I fought beside
who came from nation wide
you are all my brothers and sisters
to my bride brush those tears aside
I am here so far yet so near
I am all around in the sky and in the ground
I am in our kids
in your heart
my love caries on
when u need me look to the sky
let your mind fly
I will be there holding your hand
goodbye to those I love
we will meet again one day
we will play in the heavens above

(Just wondering what people thought of my poem)

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4 months ago
i wrote this thinking of what the soldiers over seas would want to say to their familes

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I really liked it. Very good.