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Opinions on my poem?

Hello everyone! I love writing, so I decided to write a poem about something I enjoy; playing the guitar! Any comments and/or constructive critisism would be appreciated!

The Soul of Rock 'n Roll:

Setting me free
To a world of solitude
Bass vibrating
Intensity set at its maximum

Each strum is a new key
Of my soul
Unlocking the wild side
Of my solemn, conservative world

This staff holds the notes
Of my life
Feel the everlasting beat
Gliding between my fingers

This music streams from the amp
To captivate existence
Plucking the firm strings
That unleashes the soul of rock ??n roll.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I liked it. I like the last line, it reminds me of something Jack Black would say. can you hear it? LOL Nicely done. I love guitar too.