Do you think this poem is good. i had to write a alphabet poem.?

Question:

Do you think this poem is good. i had to write a alphabet poem.?

Ok well i am in 9th grade. if you have any suggested changes please let me know.

Heading in from Middle School
In with the older kids.
Going from the oldest to youngest
Having fun at our first dance, homecoming
Some of the best friends we??ll ever make.
Class of 2010 is the best.
Having crazy crushes is fun
Of all the ones, I will remember a few.
Owe are so sad, for best years are over
L eaving for college
Yes we are gone
Even though we will miss it
After will be better things m
Remember one thing to say though
See you in 10 years

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4 months ago
Heading in from Middle School
In with the older kids.
Going from the oldest to youngest
Having fun at our first dance, homecoming
Some of the best friends we??ll ever make.
Class of 2010 is the best.
Having crazy crushes is fun
Of all the ones, I will remember a few.
Owe are so sad, for best years are over
L eaving for college
Yes we are gone
Even though we will miss it
After will be better things m
Remember one thing to say though
See you in 10 years

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AND IT DOESNT HAVE TO RHYME... thats why its an alphabet poem... not all peoms have to rhyme

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It doesn't even rhyme, I don't like it

Hole in my head
Inside Im dead
Going to school
How come its so cruel
Somebody tell me
Cause Im going crazy
Old people telling me
Old people smell like pee
Look at me now
yes Im a cow
Everyone stinks
All of you finks
Remember what I said
See you when your dead