Do you like this poem?I wrote it.?

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Do you like this poem?I wrote it.?

one woman sits at the front porch each day, the poor one begs for food, her hair turning gray. one woman scofs at the other ones worry the other one has to live in a hurry. the rich woman is not really rich in the soul, the other one,d rather starve than eat something stole. They each have a chance to accept who he is, but one is just to busy she just has to live. One women dies at peace with the earth. the other one died in labor giving birth. The rich women sat looking up at the poor, and she begged for just one drop more. The women looked down at the pitiful soul, she widhed she could help, she could have some control. But in the end no one could turn back time, the woman was lost she left in her prime.

(does this story sound familiar? I wrote it about the parable that Jesus told.)

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too confusing