I need poem critics . . .?

Question:

I need poem critics . . .?

Okay, I wrote this poem, tell me what you think. I know it's not professional but it's my favorite one that I've ever written.

I would fly into the distance
but he's broken my wings
He's left a dagger in my heart
and the pain still stings
But now that I've met you
I'm opening new doors
you're wings look strong
can I fly on yours?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i give you a lot of credit for sharing your writing.
just one suggestion:
"you're" in the seventh line should be changed to "your."
good job!