How does this poem sound?

Question:

How does this poem sound?

I wrote this, what do you think?

A blissful breeze,
a gentle heartbeat,
a silent breath,
a single tear,
is it a friendship,
or is it love?
whatever it is,
It hurts.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

If you think the poem is good, it really doesn't matter what I think in the long run does it?