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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Do Like This Poem?Question: Do Like This Poem?tears full as the river flows, my haert cry's out but i'm all alone, is the end near i hope so, hope for the earth what is that? but will i ever go back to the world that was kind and thoghtfull? i don't know but a new day will dawn in my eyes as i cry for a life we all had befor the world dies. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I liked it that you write what you're feeling. But you're not writing ALL that you're feeling. DON'T PUT LIMITS ON YOURSELF. Let your soul f l o w. . . |