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Do you like my poem?

My personal Demons

Deep down inside me this a dark thing that wants to break free. It has it grasp over
over me it makes me feel like life is'nt worth it all. Like death is the way out.I try
to fight it but its taking over.It's making me hurt my self and people around me.
It wants blood it needs a life.It's going to be the end of me the end of my life.I
could feel it i could feel its plan .It plans to drive me crazy it plans to take me
over. It plan's destroy all that i have all that i love .I know how to end it tring to
hurting other peole . The only way is having to end me. It's the only way to stop the pain
that it would make me cause


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

ur poem rox man i have already copy it...... i dun know how ppl have talents to write poem themselves
i wanna do it but i can't by da wae ur poem is reali reali reali nice............
i am sure u will become a poet wen u grow up if u keep coming up wid this nice rocking poems