What do you think of my poem?

Question:

What do you think of my poem?

your on your knees
i have a gun
don't you wish you could turn and run
your wondering what i will do
man this really sucks for you
you begin to cry
you know why
you try to bargain
its a waste of breath
i get money for your unfortunate death
ill see you in hell
is the last words you will ever yell

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

ummm violent, but other than that its a soul song....good 4.8/5