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I would like your opinion on this poem, please?

I would like to know what goes on inside of you when you read this, what you felt after having read it & what you think of it. Also what your interpretation is of what this poem is trying to express.

Feel through nature

Like seeds that have yet to sprout
And beautiful creatures in spring get out
Like the rain and the rays up in the sky
and blooming flowers not looked upon die
All flowed like a river stream
An unknown journey through the high and unseen
Feeling like the wind blowing into a mystery
Not concerned about what is, but free and happy to be
Encouraged in the journey for knowledge
Boundaries were set and put out on a map
A flag put upon land where all got turned back
To all the good comes an end,
where the correlation of everything seeps through like sand
The familiar got put to a stumble,
which made an unfinished structure crumble

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4 months ago
If this poem confuses you, as I know it will have that effect on many, try reading it again. If u still can't get out of it, then just try 2 tell me what you think of it. Confusion is 1 of the things I wanted 2 get out, but not so much so that u don't know what's written, but so u can still read between the lines


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow, it's wonderful. It speaks to what the human experience is really about. We are all big bundles of undiscovered potential. We travel through life, oftentimes unnoticed, frequently not knowing ourselves even what things we may influence for better and worse. We're all just waiting to see what way the wind will blow us and see what there when we get there.

This poem not only reflects the human experience in it's metaphor, it reflects it in it's development, beginning in a seed and eventually after periods of blooming, wandering, curiosity, discovery, ownership, and entropy, we wind up crumbled.

It's not sad, it's kind of, ....yeah, I had it right the first time. Wonderful