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How do you think my poem is?

Blue
You??re not in the room and it??s not fair.
I??m feeling so lonely being with me.
I wish you were here and not there
To see how sorrowful I could be.

I love it when I get your touch,
I hate it when you??re not here.
I do love to kiss you so much,
And to hold you by me, so near.

This is the moment I need you most,
But you??re not here and I feel blue.
So I daydream us on a coast,
Walking close with our love so true.

I do know this dream will soon fade,
I will be left in this longest night;
To escape this night I want your aid,
I want u to come and keep me tight.

The dream is gone, and I??m left alone,
But my heart is filled with love and mirth,
For you??ll come just like the day you shone
In the morning of the day of the sun??s birth.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

very ........... BLUE