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Do you like this?

I am trying to translate some poems into English, but I am not always sure of every nuance of a word or expression. What do you think of the following one?

-------- DREAMING -------

a bird with two bodies
was drawing near in twin flight from its world
it was searching for nest in me
I was waiting eyes wide open all day all night
its feathers were rustling wriggling for a moment
to enter under my eyelids from beak to clutches –
to deposit an egg in my strawy thoughts

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3 months ago
I would like to know why you like it or why you did not like it. Thank you for your help. I am not a native.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

sorry but not really