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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Help much!! i need YOUR opinion....whatcha' think?Question: Help much!! i need YOUR opinion....whatcha' think?okay so i got this poem and i need CONSTRUCTIVE critism ONLY :D okay i got this much but im NOT done i have to edit it. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You may want to adjust the meter length so it flows better. Also, some ideas can be stated more clearly with an allusion, which can also give your poem deeper meaning. Generally a poem should have more than one "tone" to it. There is the surface concept that fits the individual situation of the poet or "speaker" and there is another, deeper and more subtle, layer that relates to all people. This helps people to connect to the poem as it seems to be about THEM. |