Is this an OK Gothic poem?

Question:

Is this an OK Gothic poem?

Mind that I just jotted it down and I know it sucks fat ***. It's my first poem, kinda sucks.

Blood and blade are intertwined
bleeding
sighing
feel no pain
watch the crimson life flow
as Cimmerii wait for another soul
howling
living in eternal caligo
darkness rapes my twisted soul
as Hades torments me
with nox clavicula of
eternal life

Go easy on me, I don't expect great answers, I just don't want insulting ones. I actually really don't care because this piece sucks and I don't know why I'm putting it online.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The poem isn't to bad. Just needs to mean a little more but I like it. You should go to http://www.gothiccoloringbook.com... and create a profile. We would like to see more up and coming artists like you.