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Poem I wrote.. .care to shoot at an interpretation?

I found the Words

Heart started aching
Couldn??t handle the pain
Took off my shoes
Stepped out in the rain
Looked up into the clouds
The rain poured over my face
Whimpered softly in anguish
For what rain couldn??t erase

Aching more intensely
As each moment passed by
I threw up both fists
Lashing out at the sky
Salty tears just kept rolling
Down onto my lips
I realized right then
It was your fingertips
That would stop the aching
With one simple touch
Caressing my face
Or one simple hug

By now my body was dripping
Realization and water
Left hopeless and shivering
Why even bother
I sat down on the pavement
Hugged close my knees
Closed my eyes tight
I still felt my heart bleed

Temperature dropping
Rain pounding down hard
I could almost not feel
What was stabbing my heart
Off into sleep I drifted
Dreamed you were there
Holding me tightly
Stroking my hair
I knew I was dreaming
But it was so close to relief
So I held on so tightly
Hoping you??d never leave
That I??d never wake up
Just lay t


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Loss 0f love?