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Can you please read my poem and tell me if its good or not!?

I like the sunshine
it looks like a big line
the greenbean
so green
and so ugly

i like to eat the noodles
even though it reminds me of poodles
i hate to look at you
u look like string bean stew

i like sunshine

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3 months ago
i will NOT get mad
so u can be as mean as u want
i want COMPLETE
honesty


please


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i love this poem, helen. it is pure poetry. you should think about entering it in a contest. love, andrea.