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What do you honestly think of this poem?

??One Saying – But is it Mine???

One saying,
Only this one,
One saying,
And boy is it fun!

There was a time,
So long ago,
When sayings and poems,
They were alike.

But now that this poem,
About one saying,
Is here and written out,
There is some wonder,
Some worry perhaps,
That makes one ask:
??Is this saying yours???


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Kinda stupid. I think it's ok, but one line really stands out to me and kinda ruins it.

"And boy is it fun!". Maybe you could think of a new line there.