Question:
I wrote a lil something. Tell me what you think?
What is your opinion?
I hate you so much
I'm not sure why
You make me sick
and I wish you'd die
You'e a relationship estranger
You're lucky i don't mess you up
Instead, I write to vent my anger......
okay... not used to doing the hate thing so it kind of sucks... but yeah. I'm not done yet, i've got a ways to go. But that's how it starts. So let me know!
Additional Details3 months ago
If it continues like this it'll be crap? hunny, it started as crap... it's difficult for me to write this because i'm not usually a hateful person..... and i wanted to put one in every category. and Dislike/Hatred was the only one i didn't have.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You need to incorporate a more descriptive art to it than just "I hate you" ie:
You are the putrid stench that rocks my stomach; the garbage truck that vomits week old bile in vain attempt to gain a smile.
Your name echoes down the spiraled barrel of the gun as i force in shells. In my rage the bullets fly blind and land on useless targets. You are petrified, but I cannot land a blow, I bend, i break the bow. I am useless in my rage.
or more happy hate
I bought a gun today
twas much less than I thot I'd pay
the shells were marked half off
I can use more to blow your head off
I followed you to work
and cut your break lines jerk!
I smiled when you got home
the arsenic is almost gone!
Soon you'll be sleeping peacful
and we'll all bring you flowers
RIP
well, I'm not feeling very inspired either, good luck