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Whadya think?:D?

"The Iron Giants give a deafaning shriek as an explosion resounds- their payload whistling as they hurdle through the air. Thier destination? A village of civillians; Men, Women and Children living harmoniously as one in their barren paradise of sand and sun. The monsterous tubes meet their target- a small wooden hut in the center of the village. The initial blast caused by these bombs incinerate all but the outlying huts on the edges of the settlement. Most residents are killed isntantly; Bloody corpses lay smoldering all around- their charred bodies and the enormous left over crater scarring the earth forever. A cry is heard- a small baby lies helpless in his mothers' limp arms. Yet more children take in the abhorring scene of death and destruction; hatred grows hot in their veins like the salty tears now welling as clear orbs in their eyes. Homes burn- they and the families they housed are no more. Mother earth cries in misery- her soothing tears of cool rain blot the blood -C-

3 months ago
stained dirt. What is left in the ash is the legacy of the survivors- their future children will one day share the hatred so cruelly pushed into the broken hearts of their parents. This is the stem of terrorism.

3 months ago
" Kinda morbid and dark, makes me feel wierd but its what I think about war:P

I like it a lot. Is it from a story you're writing??? The only thing that stuck out for me is that in a desert, where this is taking place, there wouldn't be a wooden hut-- you can't find a lot of wood in a desert-like environment. The hut would most likely be made of mud, or cement...? This was the only thing that didn't fit, otherwise I like it.