Question:
What do you think of this poem?
??Darkness and Light??
This world is full of darkness,
As the day turns to night.
We do way too much waiting,
For dawn??s early light.
You??re barely able to keep a straight head,
Because your patience hangs by a thin thread.
Light on your soul causes a shadow effect,
For every action in this world must bear a consequence.
When you??re finally engulfed in the shadow of the doubt,
Only your screams will be coming out.
Your shadow??s become thicker than steel,
Because that??s how you really feel.
You seem to have sunken lower than the ground,
Where you can??t hear even the slightest sound.
And right as the thread begins to snap,
Somebody seems to give you a tap.
They make you a deal.
A promise to heal.
You were an empty shell,
Until you heard the holy bell.
Light rushed in, the shadow out,
But now someone else has been engulfed in the doubt.
Light on your soul creates a shadow effect,
For every action in this world must bear a consequence.
We??re all linked like a chain;
A chain of memories and a chain of pain.
When it comes down to just you,
You??ll find this is true??
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow! dude u r talented! that almost brought a teardrop to my eye. i wish there was more i need more of ur poems. it was so sad and dark but at the same time inspiring and it reached out to me. anywayz... AWSOME!!!