Question:
What do you think of my poem?
Numbing cold
Am I here?
Iridescent hues of color
Are all I can see
Entity inside me
Who art thou?
Shifting faces
Yet faceless myself
I cannot care about them
Why am I here?
Vengeance among man
They're all the same
Desolate dreams
Do they matter at all?
Penetrating time
And abandoning the instincts
Inscribed altruism
Is this a joke?
My time is fading
I'm done with these bounds
Ubiquitous deceit
What is tomorrow's purpose?
Treading into the future
With Replicated fates
Triality of Jins
Would you like to stay?
Conquer our purpose
Blend in for now
Blinded denizens
Cut the cord
And let me be born
From the crystalline womb of eternity
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it... Well, I like the parts that I actually understand! I didn't understand all of the words that you used...but, nevertheless, I understood most of it, and I liked it! You're a good writer. You're a deep person.