What do you think of this poem? What do I need to change?

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What do you think of this poem? What do I need to change?

For my English (Im a Senior) I had to write a sonnet about love or a crush or something similar. I chose to write it about the guy I have liked for about a year and a half. The sonnet had to be 14 lines long with the rhyme scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. What do you guys think? If there is something you think I should change please tell me.

The blue of his eyes, more brilliant than the sky
His smile is brighter than the light of the moon
No matter what people say he??s not a bad guy
Years of crushing makes me feel like a buffoon

My body shivers at the sound of his voice
I can??t help but smile when I see his face
My mind tells me I??ve made the wrong choice
Unfortunately my heart is in another place

My love for him is kept hidden deep inside
I keep my feelings locked in my heart
For when they??re revealed I will be denied
He wouldn??t accept what I would impart

Because he desires perfection
And my looks would only lead to rejection

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3 months ago
Rob, it is wordy because each line has to be at least 10 syllables :)

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

awwww..... 5/5! thats the most best romanic poem ever and if you dont pass with that i'll call your teacher up! (i've never given that high of score until now... its the best!)