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Can somene please help me write this poem?

I have to write a poem by tomorrow. It has to be 14 lines long and it has the rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG

The topic I have chose to write about is my crush

This is what i have so far:

A - The blue of his eyes more brilliant than the sky
B - His smile is brighter than the light from the moon
A - No matter what what people say he's not a bad guy
B - Two years of crushing makes me feel like a buffoon

C -
D -
C -
D -

E - My love for him is kept hidden deep inside
F - I keep my feelings locked up in my heart
E - For when they're revealed I may be denied
F -

G -
G -

Additional Details

3 months ago
Some info:

- He has light brown hair which is kind of longish, and he keeps it kind of messy
- He used to be in a band which I loved and I was really upset when he quit because of some girl
- His style is skater/punk/rock
- He has an amazing, funny personality
- I have liked him for a year and a half
- He is two years younger than me
- He doesn't like overweight people
- He likes perfection when it comes to girls


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

C-I dont know what I was thinking but I made the right choice
D-He never used to yell at me but now he just screams
C-I realize each morning by the sound of his voice
D-What is now a nightmare used to be a pleasant dream

E - My love for him is kept hidden deep inside
F - I keep my feelings locked up in my heart
E - For when they're revealed I may be denied
F- Because my love for him will come out more like a fart


G- Please just go away and spare me from the shame
G- I'm so glad now cuz I cant even remember his name.