It took a long time to write this poem.?

Question:

It took a long time to write this poem.?

Will you please give your considered opinion of my work.
It goes like this :

My da,he came from Dublin
Me ma, she came from Meath
Me hands and face are dirty
But I'm spotless underneath

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

well, it did give me a good laugh. i think you should try to rethink it.