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Do u like my poem?

Knife's are falling all around, with you dodging up and down, Then you think is there any point dodging when my life's not worth living, then you stop and the knife's stop falling, then you move and then, there again! Life is so confusing, when you stop choosing, then by surprise one hits you from the side, as you lay there in pain, no on cares for you but yourself in vain. Your friend walks in and sees you there all they can do is stop and stair, slowly but surely they start breaking down in deep despair!!

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3 months ago
Please say what you like about it! Im 14

3 months ago
Please comment of some more of my poems!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You need help you have some problems. It was good strait from the heart.