Question:
Poems this time two for you!?
Friends Outside Enemies In
I need to let my friends back in but enemies decide to win.
I need to get my life back from the darkness of night.
But the night wins and there is no more life.
Living in a world with one true friend.
But enemies might take her at the end.
Living in this place alone.
So do not leave me pick up the phone.
Living in Hope Now
I am living in hope now.
Only you showed me how.
I thank you every day.
Just for the words I heard you say.
Speaking to me like you were God.
Not to little and not to broad.
Leave me here on my own, I can manage.
Do not worry it is to my advantage.
See you, wait don't go!
I will miss you so!
To late you are out the door.
"Do not worry," you say, "Your spirit will soar!"
I beleive you because you are right.
I will not let down, I will put up a fight~
Thanks in advance. NO RUDE COMMENTS!
Additional Details3 months ago
I do not mean to seem mean myself but when I say no rude comments I mean it Vandy*. That hurt my feelings, I love my poems!
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi Emily,
Both of the poems are good,
Almost feel them I could.
They share your inner soul,
And we can feel it all.
Your heart speaks to ours,
It blossoms like flowers.
Your emotions are very real,
Each of them can we feel.
Your writing strength is growing,
And your many talents are showing.
Keep on doing your best,
And you'll always "ace" the test.
Good job, Emily, let's see more of your excellence, OK??