Question:
Poems for my fans and all!?
Please no rude comments!
Living in Tears
I am living in a tear filled place.
I will not run out there are here on my face.
Secrets and shadows are all the same.
Your the one to blame.
I will get out of here I really will.
Right now I am stuck here.
Don't worry I will always have an extra tear!
I'll give you one so you can cry with me.
Do not worry I will always be.
Here to cry for you.
Additional Details3 months ago
I mean "You are the one to blame." thanks.
3 months ago
I am gonna post more okay? So watch for some on general art and humanities.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi Emily,
I've been reading your poems, and I'm amazed by them.
But, just like a couple others have pointed out, you DO want
to closely watch your contractions, hon. Many times some of
the STRONGEST feelings can be expressed through those
contractions, OK?
The feeling I get through this poem is deep sadness, like a
pain so deep, it won't ever fade--Eternal Tears, forever flowing, and never soothing. You need a hug??