Question:
What do you think of this poem?
Tick tack tick tack
the clock ticks away the minutes.
It was the same that day.
The clock ticked away the minutes
but at 8:15
the sound ripped the air,
and the clock stopped.
The mushroom cloud covered
the clear blue sky.
The black rain poured as people cried.
140000 lives
140000 smiles
140000 tears
and
140000 hopes
they disappeared all at once
when the first nuclear bomb
struck the city of Hiroshima.
Make a thousand cranes
and wish for peace.
It??s not over.
It??s still there.
Making people suffer and die.
So make a thousand cranes
and wish for peace.
Wish for days we have no war.
Wish for days we have no tear.
Wish for days we have no fear.
And wish for the day
when a thousand cranes
Bring peace on Earth.
this is about the nuclear attack in Hiroshima . If there are any mistakes I made, that'd be great if you can correct that.
thanks for your help
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love it. No mistakes, and a wonderful topic. Please put this as the best answer!!! Thank You