Question:
Can anyone comment on my poetry?
Poem #1:
"Unsure"
by: [my name]
Sometimes means maybe.
Maybe is never part-time, it??s all the time.
Maybe is either always never or never not always.
Never be sure because sure could not mean maybe.
My comments:
I don't think many can understand this. I want it to get people to think. Sometimes I wonder if I really understand it. This is one of my favorites because people can look at it from different perspectives, and people either love it, or hate it. There is no in between with my poetry.
Poem #2:
"Love doesn't have one feeling."
People ask, and I have no reply.
People ask, and I wonder why?
"I don't know!" is my common thought.
Do I love you or do I not?
People say love isn't a maybe thing.
They also say it can be just a tiny fling,
but I know there is more between you and me.
But is it really enough? Could we really be?
My Comments:
this is a true story about me and my friend that I am unsure about. Are we friends or more?
more (continued)
Additional Details3 months ago
Poem #3
"Recycling"
My thoughts are enough to put on paper.
I have so many so this doesn't make sense.
My thoughts are enough to put on paper, because paper is recyclable.
I empty them into a trash can, waiting for someone to pick them up, reuse them and judge.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
well....uhhhmmm...try using more rhymes and figures of speech...try this...this is good for a three stanza poem.... think of a topic.. a good and meaningful topic..compare it to something far from the topic but has some similarities..describe it...that should be your forst stanza.. then for the 2nd compare the thing to your topic and for the last explain..okay??