Question:
Can somebody give me an opinion on my poetry?
On my Yahoo 360 there is two blogs of my poetry can anybody just leave a comment please thank you. oh and just click on the picture of me to get to my 360 thnx
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hello Sammyd,
Your two poems have plenty of feeling, but what I'm feeling
from them is confusion and possibly a bit of possessiveness.
Like you found a girl you have deep feelings for, but she does
not have those same feelings toward you---and you don't want
to let her go free (possessive).
The confusion I sense is like you're not sure of what you should do--if anything. You don't want to do something wrong,
but you also don't want to just sit around and watch her walk
away. Love can be harsh and cruel, and it's always changing.