help with my poems?

Question:

I need some criticism/help with my poems?

I need some help, i have no idea about poems...but i recently had this school project and i wrote a couple poems by myself that came to mind...but i have no idea what format they are in (ie. limeric, haiku, etc...) could you please help find out which format each are in?

And if you could then criticize them and tell me which one you like best....some suggestions, and some ideas on some other poems i can write with different formats etc..

(because of the character limit i hosted them here: http://geocities.com/inrecop/ )

Additional Details

3 months ago
heres another poem i forgot to add to my site:

Flying
You zoom down the street going 100 miles WOOSH
You pass trees and the wind breaks the branches CRACK
You stop a stop sign and the brakes screech ERRRR!
You rev up and pull the throttle VROOM
Your tires spin and you do it all over again WOOSH

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The only thing I see is that you are placing too much concrete description as opposed to abstract description that I am used to. Other than that you seem to be a very talented young writer.