What do u think about this poem i wrote 4 a 6th grade project?

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What do u think about this poem i wrote 4 a 6th grade project?

I wonder,
If a wall could talk
Exactly what would it say?
Would it tell of the pleasures?
The times to treasure?
It sure had seen a few sights
And fought a few fights,
Maybe with a painting or two!It will surely have much to tell
Living with quite a few residents and all
I??m sure not all was well
It had heard all the yelling
And probably the telling
Of a secret (or two!)
...If my wall does talk,
Don??t let it talk to you!

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aww. i think that is really cute. i like the idea too. i find mself writing a lot of poems when i'm bored and most of them rhyme like yours.cute idea/rhyming and such! good job. if you ever want to hear one of mine i'm free to share. lol.