Another revision question?

Question:

Another revision question?

Thanks everyone for the last revision here is another one i have.
I am the gentlewind
passing through the narrow cavern
I am the baby bird
takeing its first flight from the nest
I am the floating plastic bag
carelessly floating in the air

The thing is, i like the poems but they want me to revise them and i hate doing that to my work so thank you again for your help.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I understand. I never edit my poetry.
Just change the word takeing to taking.
Then, it is perfect.