What do you think of this poem?

Question:

What do you think of this poem?

A heart, a hand
To hold on, so tight
As you reach for the land,
You find all is right.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Good simple poem, but if anything, ironically, it is perhaps too wordy. Why do you need "on" in line two? It doesn't need to be there; or "as you" in line three, also not necessary ...

But it has great ideas and symbolism.