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Another poem- what do you think?

You were mine.

I was yours.

Swept away.

Behind invisible doors.

Locked inside.

But I am free.

Know that you.

Will always have me.

You may move on.

And not look Back.

I realize.

We are on different tracks

You stay left.

And I go right.

But we were once.

In the same night.

You fell fast.

I wonder a lot.

Do you do that often?

Or did I hit a soft spot?

I realize we.

Could probably not be.

I don't expect.

To wait and see.

I can't forget.

What happened that night.

I carry it with me.

The rest of my life.

No regrets.

I couldn't lie.

Most people do.

But I didn't cry.

Life has changed.

Since that cold night.

It wasn't planned.

Blame moonlight.

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3 months ago
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is a beautiful poem and has great sensitive emotional moods for one that has lost a boyfriend.