Question:
What do u think of this poem?
I want to know what you all think about this poem. Do you think it's good??
You told me once that you'd been hurt.
That made me think you'd do that to me never.
I soon found out that pain was coming my way.
You played me like an act in a play.
You acted as if nothing was wrong,
but in reality everything was torn.
When you choose to cheat, you choose to be the one to hurt me most.
Three years passed and soon we talk.
You tell me that you have something to say.
You tell me you could not go on this way.
The words i never thought i would ever hear you say, came out of your mouth that very day.
You said you're sorry please forgive i understand if you say no.
I sat there thinking that very day, that what does it matter if i say no.
Our relationship is ruined and i'm sure i'll see you never.
Additional Details3 months ago
i'm not asking u to help me get over him. i'm asking u what u think about the poem. i'm trying to be a better writer i'm writing about my past and how i felt. i don't even like him anymore!!!
3 months ago
and brian you used too many big words for me to even understand what u said. sorry
3 months ago
this is my first poem i've ever wrote so sorry if it's bad.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's nice, and really sad! I like it.