Question:
What do you think of my poem/question?
A stroll by the shore called confusion,
Fist fight between the soul and the mind,
Discovering torment,
Affliction in the belly of a thousand thoughts.
Is there a question that can not be asked?
You seem to be in a haze,
Should
Or should you not censure my words
With hysterical craze?!
Answer me,
Is there a thought that can not be called up with loud fury,
In passion and rage,
With sadness and laughter?
Am I allowed to speak
While looking at the eyes of a sage,
At your eyeballs filled with detest?
Bored,
I walk away with fright.
The beast is stalking me,
I do not wish a gray future,
I refuse to stand numb amongst the army of drones,
Will it swallow my insides, like a predator its prey?
Again,
Tired and shaken by the psyches greatest dread,
I find myself gazing at something
That seems to be filled with vivid colors
And pathological morbidness,
??Tis my imagination!
Yes...and than I stroll away...
What?!-NO!
Go back, go back!
??Tis not over yet!
Go back, go back...Has it captured me?
Additional Details3 months ago
Pls give a comment about my poem. What do you think about it? Can You answer it?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Dnt put ure poems on the internet someone will take it and betend that they wrote it quite gud :)