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What do you think of this poem?

She stares out the window,
hears all the small noises -
Leaves rustling, children playing.
There is nothing inside of her
so the sounds fill her up.

She looks away and fills her lungs with smoke,
Watches it flow out of her, dancing in the air.
She thinks, if I could be smoke,
dancing in the air.

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3 months ago
Yes, I wrote this myself. Thanks so much for the feedback :)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sounds sad.