Ok so we had to make up poems for class are these good?

Question:

Ok so we had to make up poems for class are these good?

The first one is a catalog poem. the second one is a weather compared to an animal. the third one is a haiku about nature. Are they okay if not do you have any suggestions on how I can fix them?

Catalog Poem
Daily

Getting out of bed everyday,
smelling the fresh air.
Eating a tasty breakfast,
french toast dipped in syrup.
Going to School,
seeing my friends and completing my work.
When it turns 3pm,
going back home.

Extended Image
Thunder

It strikes as the dog howls.
It looks you in the eye and seems to frighten you.
You try to stay out of its way,
but it can still get you.
It has a loud shocking sound.
Its eyes are yellow; it glares at you stays a while,
then leaves after its done damage.

Haiku
Nature

Oh how fast trees grow
Like children, they grow so fast and
When we glare there gone.

Additional Details

3 months ago
okay so It turns out I did my haiku wrong so I did a new one is this good?

Haiku
??Nature??
Natures all around,
It??s up high and down low, its
Everywhere we go!
By:Me

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

you have a couple of mixed metaphors in the 'Thunder' poem.

Thunder doesn't strike, lightening does. Thunder rumbles, sounds, echoes, etc.

Thunder isn't visible but it can shout in your ear, whisper from a distance, growl it's anger in your ears, echo the fears of storms past, etc.

Thunder generally is born through the skies from darkened clouds.

Mispelling in your haiku of the personal possessive "they're" meaning they are.

you are doing o.k., just clean up your visual and mental imagery. hope that helps.