Can you tell me your opinion please? Is this good?

Question:

Can you tell me your opinion please? Is this good?

Hi! I asked this question just yesterday but i put it under marriage and divorce on accident so im moving it here to see if maybe ill get more answers this way...So Im 15 years old and I wrote this poem yesterday and I would like you guys to please tell me what you think about it. Truth would be nice :)I can take criticism.

When I Die Will You Still Love Me?

When I die,
I'll still love you with all my heart,
I'll be looking down on you praying you'll still be happy,
I'll be hoping you still remember the great times we had.
And when I die,
I'll still be thinking about you every minute of every day,
I'll be thinking about whether you still think about me,
I'll be thinking about how much I really meant to you,
But when I die,
Will you still think about me?
Will you remember the days we spent together holding hands and laughing?
Will you still have room for me in your heart?
So when I die,
Will you still love me?

Additional Details

3 months ago
Thanks for everyones comments, the good and the bad. And just so you guys know, no i am not planning on dying or suicide or anything like that, i know a few of you were wondering that.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Very good, keep writing.